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Forrest Gump Book review


’Maybe I am an idiot, but I’m not stupid.’ Gump said. I think Gump is brave and lucky. Every time he encountered difficulties, he always could solve it. If I were him, I must be so depressed. I admire that he had his dream and realized it.

‘Stupid is as stupid does.’ Gump’s mom said. Although Gump isn't a smart man, but he persist everything he loved in life. He helped Bubba realize his dream: had a shrimp boat. (In the book, he first met the Bubba in school.) Later, He met Sue (an ape) at a jungle, and shrimping together. I think this is very interesting.

He knew Jenny and loved her thirty years. Between those years, they had much frustration and separated many times. Last, Jenny had a child, his name is Forrest. That’s all right, he is Gump’s son. I think they are very happiness.

In the book and the movie, there are a lot of different places. Like Gump ever took drugs, Jenny didn’t have AIDS. And Gump was never a spaceman and didn't know an ape named Sue. But they are as exciting and moving. I will never forget the spirit of Forrest Gump.

因為第一次寫英文報告,
怕有些文法錯的太離譜,
我知道妮論很多英文高手的 smilebrit
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he could always solve it.
I think they were very happy. (happiness是名詞)
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he could always solve it.
I think they were very happy. (happiness是名詞)
But they are as exciting and moving 這句是 [您必需注冊登錄才能查看本圖。]

感謝 love it

那句是書和電影都一樣精彩且感人 smile2
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Forrest Gump Book review


’Maybe I am an idiot, but I’m not stupid.’ Gump said. I think Gump is brave and lucky. Every time he encountered difficulties, he always could solve it. If I were him, I must be so depressed. I admire that he had his dream and realized it.

‘Stupid is as stupid does.’ Gump’s mom said. Although Gump isn't a smart man, but he persist everything he loved in life. He helped Bubba realize his dream: had a shrimp boat. (In the book, he first met the Bubba in school.) Later, He met Sue (an ape) at a jungle, and shrimping together. I think this is very interesting.

He knew Jenny and loved her thirty years. Between those years, they had much frustration and separated many times. Last, Jenny had a child, his name is Forrest. That’s all right, he is Gump’s son. I think they are very happiness.

In the book and the movie, there are a lot of different places. Like Gump ever took drugs, Jenny didn’t have AIDS. And Gump was never a spaceman and didn't know an ape named Sue. But they are as exciting and moving. I will never forget the spirit of Forrest Gump.

因為第一次寫英文報告,
怕有些文法錯的太離譜,
我知道妮論很多英文高手的 smilebrit

Gump stated that ’Maybe I am an idiot, but I’m not stupid.’ I think Gump is brave and lucky. Every time he encountered difficulties, he always managed to solve it. If I were him, I will definitely be so depressed. I admire the fact that he had his dream and realized about it.

‘Stupid is as stupid does.’ Gump’s mom said. Although Gump isn't a smart man, he still persist everything he loved in life. He helped Bubba realize his dream: to own a shrimp boat. (He first met Bubba at School, referring to the book) Later on, He met Sue (an ape) at a jungle, and shrimping together. I think this is a very interesting plot.

He knew Jenny and loved her for thirty years. They had much frustration and separated many times between these years. At last, Jenny had a child, his name is Forrest. That’s all right, he is Gump’s son. I think they must be very happy.

A lot of different plots are referred in the book. For example Gump ever took drugs, Jenny didn’t have AIDS. And Gump was never a spaceman and didn't know an ape named Sue. But they are as exciting and moving. I will never forget the spirit of Forrest Gump.

如果交給我大概會寫成這樣 big smile
沒什麼大錯(happiness除外)只是改成我自己的風格而已 hussy
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p19857
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來自 : Yunlin
今日心情 : Don't be ashamed.
最愛妮歌 : I Wanna Go
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Forrest Gump Book review


’Maybe I am an idiot, but I’m not stupid.’ Gump said. I think Gump is brave and lucky. Every time he encountered difficulties, he always could solve it. If I were him, I must be so depressed. I admire that he had his dream and realized it.

‘Stupid is as stupid does.’ Gump’s mom said. Although Gump isn't a smart man, but he persist everything he loved in life. He helped Bubba realize his dream: had a shrimp boat. (In the book, he first met the Bubba in school.) Later, He met Sue (an ape) at a jungle, and shrimping together. I think this is very interesting.

He knew Jenny and loved her thirty years. Between those years, they had much frustration and separated many times. Last, Jenny had a child, his name is Forrest. That’s all right, he is Gump’s son. I think they are very happiness.

In the book and the movie, there are a lot of different places. Like Gump ever took drugs, Jenny didn’t have AIDS. And Gump was never a spaceman and didn't know an ape named Sue. But they are as exciting and moving. I will never forget the spirit of Forrest Gump.

因為第一次寫英文報告,
怕有些文法錯的太離譜,
我知道妮論很多英文高手的 smilebrit

Gump stated that ’Maybe I am an idiot, but I’m not stupid.’ I think Gump is brave and lucky. Every time he encountered difficulties, he always managed to solve it. If I were him, I will definitely be so depressed. I admire the fact that he had his dream and realized about it.

‘Stupid is as stupid does.’ Gump’s mom said. Although Gump isn't a smart man, he still persist everything he loved in life. He helped Bubba realize his dream: to own a shrimp boat. (He first met Bubba at School, referring to the book) Later on, He met Sue (an ape) at a jungle, and shrimping together. I think this is a very interesting plot.

He knew Jenny and loved her for thirty years. They had much frustration and separated many times between these years. At last, Jenny had a child, his name is Forrest. That’s all right, he is Gump’s son. I think they must be very happy.

A lot of different plots are referred in the book. For example Gump ever took drugs, Jenny didn’t have AIDS. And Gump was never a spaceman and didn't know an ape named Sue. But they are as exciting and moving. I will never forget the spirit of Forrest Gump.

如果交給我大概會寫成這樣 big smile
沒什麼大錯(happiness除外)只是改成我自己的風格而已 hussy

太感動了 fuckinggood

But they are as exciting and moving. 這句沒有錯吼?
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Dekiru
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妮幣 妮幣 : 10565
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p19857 寫到:
Dekiru 寫到:
p19857 寫到:
Forrest Gump Book review


’Maybe I am an idiot, but I’m not stupid.’ Gump said. I think Gump is brave and lucky. Every time he encountered difficulties, he always could solve it. If I were him, I must be so depressed. I admire that he had his dream and realized it.

‘Stupid is as stupid does.’ Gump’s mom said. Although Gump isn't a smart man, but he persist everything he loved in life. He helped Bubba realize his dream: had a shrimp boat. (In the book, he first met the Bubba in school.) Later, He met Sue (an ape) at a jungle, and shrimping together. I think this is very interesting.

He knew Jenny and loved her thirty years. Between those years, they had much frustration and separated many times. Last, Jenny had a child, his name is Forrest. That’s all right, he is Gump’s son. I think they are very happiness.

In the book and the movie, there are a lot of different places. Like Gump ever took drugs, Jenny didn’t have AIDS. And Gump was never a spaceman and didn't know an ape named Sue. But they are as exciting and moving. I will never forget the spirit of Forrest Gump.

因為第一次寫英文報告,
怕有些文法錯的太離譜,
我知道妮論很多英文高手的 smilebrit

Gump stated that ’Maybe I am an idiot, but I’m not stupid.’ I think Gump is brave and lucky. Every time he encountered difficulties, he always managed to solve it. If I were him, I will definitely be so depressed. I admire the fact that he had his dream and realized about it.

‘Stupid is as stupid does.’ Gump’s mom said. Although Gump isn't a smart man, he still persist everything he loved in life. He helped Bubba realize his dream: to own a shrimp boat. (He first met Bubba at School, referring to the book) Later on, He met Sue (an ape) at a jungle, and shrimping together. I think this is a very interesting plot.

He knew Jenny and loved her for thirty years. They had much frustration and separated many times between these years. At last, Jenny had a child, his name is Forrest. That’s all right, he is Gump’s son. I think they must be very happy.

A lot of different plots are referred in the book. For example Gump ever took drugs, Jenny didn’t have AIDS. And Gump was never a spaceman and didn't know an ape named Sue. But they are as exciting and moving. I will never forget the spirit of Forrest Gump.

如果交給我大概會寫成這樣 big smile
沒什麼大錯(happiness除外)只是改成我自己的風格而已 hussy

太感動了 fuckinggood

But they are as exciting and moving. 這句沒有錯吼?

文法上沒錯 就看你老師有沒辦法理解了~
保險起見可以寫「But both the book and the movie are as exciting and moving.」
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Dekiru 寫到:
p19857 寫到:
Dekiru 寫到:
p19857 寫到:
Forrest Gump Book review


’Maybe I am an idiot, but I’m not stupid.’ Gump said. I think Gump is brave and lucky. Every time he encountered difficulties, he always could solve it. If I were him, I must be so depressed. I admire that he had his dream and realized it.

‘Stupid is as stupid does.’ Gump’s mom said. Although Gump isn't a smart man, but he persist everything he loved in life. He helped Bubba realize his dream: had a shrimp boat. (In the book, he first met the Bubba in school.) Later, He met Sue (an ape) at a jungle, and shrimping together. I think this is very interesting.

He knew Jenny and loved her thirty years. Between those years, they had much frustration and separated many times. Last, Jenny had a child, his name is Forrest. That’s all right, he is Gump’s son. I think they are very happiness.

In the book and the movie, there are a lot of different places. Like Gump ever took drugs, Jenny didn’t have AIDS. And Gump was never a spaceman and didn't know an ape named Sue. But they are as exciting and moving. I will never forget the spirit of Forrest Gump.

因為第一次寫英文報告,
怕有些文法錯的太離譜,
我知道妮論很多英文高手的 smilebrit

Gump stated that ’Maybe I am an idiot, but I’m not stupid.’ I think Gump is brave and lucky. Every time he encountered difficulties, he always managed to solve it. If I were him, I will definitely be so depressed. I admire the fact that he had his dream and realized about it.

‘Stupid is as stupid does.’ Gump’s mom said. Although Gump isn't a smart man, he still persist everything he loved in life. He helped Bubba realize his dream: to own a shrimp boat. (He first met Bubba at School, referring to the book) Later on, He met Sue (an ape) at a jungle, and shrimping together. I think this is a very interesting plot.

He knew Jenny and loved her for thirty years. They had much frustration and separated many times between these years. At last, Jenny had a child, his name is Forrest. That’s all right, he is Gump’s son. I think they must be very happy.

A lot of different plots are referred in the book. For example Gump ever took drugs, Jenny didn’t have AIDS. And Gump was never a spaceman and didn't know an ape named Sue. But they are as exciting and moving. I will never forget the spirit of Forrest Gump.

如果交給我大概會寫成這樣 big smile
沒什麼大錯(happiness除外)只是改成我自己的風格而已 hussy

太感動了 fuckinggood

But they are as exciting and moving. 這句沒有錯吼?

文法上沒錯 就看你老師有沒辦法理解了~
保險起見可以寫「But both the book and the movie are as exciting and moving.」

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